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Playing With Pitches Again

Still playing with Twitter pitches for Ruby Descent. I’m still a ways off from actually entering a pitch event, but here’s one I came up with that includes a better idea of the stakes:

Chromed rockets. Flappers. A wild party. A mad CEO hijacks a space elevator, and the eccentric crew must stop it from crashing.

Still fine tuning it up, but it’s getting better 🙂

2 thoughts on “Playing With Pitches Again”

  1. I would say that I get quite a good idea of the setting, but not of the MC. In fact, I don’t really know who the MC is and why he/she’s acting.

    Good luck with this. I’ve taken part to a few Twitter pitch parties and theya re fun! 🙂

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